FIELD KIT / ORIGINAL FICTIONAL REVIEW PACKET
All pictures are original shapes and text. These clips, reviewer names, notes,
question and reply are authored teaching material, not client work or captured
model output. N03 is written in a spoken style; it is not a real transcription.
The clips are silent. No recorded speech or transcription service was used.

SOURCE CUTS (proposed revisions have NOT been applied)
cut-a.mp4 = CUT A, 18 seconds, 432 displayed frames, 24 fps, 960 x 540.
cut-b.mp4 = CUT B, 20 seconds, 480 displayed frames, 24 fps, 960 x 540.
CUT B is the target for the revision list; CUT A is the earlier reference.
Both start at 00:00:00:00, zero-based frame 0. The burn-in shows cut ID,
HH:MM:SS:FF at 24 non-drop frames/second and the zero-based frame index.
Every range here uses IN inclusive / OUT exclusive. Frame index = seconds*24+FF.
00:00:11:12 is 11.5 seconds, not 11.12 seconds.
OUT 00:00:20:00 is the end boundary; B's final visible frame is 00:00:19:23.

EDITABLE SCENE MAP
S1 Choose a kit: blue MAP card left, teal NOTES card right.
S2 Lay out the route: blue route line with orange circle on its first bend;
   checklist at right; lower caption "A SMALL PLAN, READY TO TRY."
S3 Pack the kit: teal bag with dark FIELD NOTES label; KEEP EXPLORING below.
CUT A: S1 [0,144) / 00:00:00:00–00:00:06:00;
       S2 [144,288) / 00:00:06:00–00:00:12:00;
       S3 [288,432) / 00:00:12:00–00:00:18:00.
CUT B: added intro [0,48) / 00:00:00:00–00:00:02:00;
       S1 [48,192) / 00:00:02:00–00:00:08:00;
       S2 [192,336) / 00:00:08:00–00:00:14:00;
       S3 [336,480) / 00:00:14:00–00:00:20:00.
The intro is a version difference, not a response to the feedback below.
Do not automatically offset all notes: N01/N02/N03/N04/N08 already name B.

COMPLETE AUTHORED MESSAGES — no omitted reply
N01 — Mira, written feedback
Cut B, IN 00:00:10:00 OUT 00:00:11:12: shorten the lower blue caption from
"A SMALL PLAN, READY TO TRY." to "MAKE A SMALL PLAN." in just that range.
Keep its blue box, the checklist and the map unchanged. Keep the duration.

N02 — Sol, written visual reference
In Cut B's first "Choose a kit" shot, enlarge the MAP word on the blue card
at the left by 10 percent. Only that word: keep the card, its map icon, the
NOTES card, other text and shot duration unchanged. Apply through that shot.

N03 — Mira, authored spoken-style note, NOT a transcription
Cut B at twelve seconds — no, sorry, fourteen seconds. When "Pack the kit"
starts, make the FIELD NOTES label on the bag white through the rest of that
shot. Only the label color, not the bag. Keep its words, size and position.
The fourteen-second reference replaces my twelve-second reference.

N04 — Sol, vague written feedback
Cut B, the middle feels slow. Trim it a little.

N05 — Mira, explicitly referring to the OLD cut
I'm looking at Cut A, IN 00:00:06:00 OUT 00:00:08:00. Remove the orange
circle on the first bend of the map in that range. Keep the blue route line
and everything else unchanged.

N06 — Editor, complete authored clarification question
For N05, do you mean the same first-bend orange circle in Cut B at IN
00:00:08:00 OUT 00:00:10:00, rather than B at 00:00:06:00–00:00:08:00?
Those B clock ranges show different shots. N04 still needs its own location:
which visible event and exact IN/OUT should be trimmed, and by how much?
Please keep those two answers separate.

N07 — Mira, complete authored fictional reply
Yes, for N05 use Cut B IN 00:00:08:00 OUT 00:00:10:00 and the orange circle
at the first bend of the map. For N05 only, remove it in that range; keep
all other B content unchanged by this edit. I am only confirming N05's
location, not changing other notes. I am not clarifying N04's "middle"
note, and this reply is not final sign-off on the cut.

N08 — Sol, explicit preservation note
Cut B, the "Pack the kit" shot from 00:00:14:00 to 00:00:20:00: keep the
bag's position and KEEP EXPLORING ending title unchanged. Add no transition.
This does not withdraw N03's label-color request.

STILL OPEN
N04: which visible event, which B IN/OUT, and how much should be removed?
No later answer is supplied. Keep its location/range blank and do not trim.
No final review approval, editor assignment or delivery deadline is supplied.